::Sullen Riot: A Green Day Fan Fiction Archive ::

tess em
Jan 27, 2012 12:23 pm
Also every story currently in the submissions has been sent a rejection letter.
tess em
Jan 27, 2012 12:21 pm
Lixfer was here?! Fuck I need to catch up damnit
Senora Swanky
Jan 27, 2012 05:15 am
Lixfer! I see you!!!
LifeSuxThenUDie
Jan 27, 2012 03:23 am
Happy 5 AM!!!
Evenstar606
Jan 27, 2012 02:10 am
I updated. Finally.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 08:53 pm
Yay!
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 08:34 pm
Woot, woot! Bring it!
colormestupidx
Jan 26, 2012 08:34 pm
Woot! Everyone's making progress!
tess em
Jan 26, 2012 08:30 pm
Not going to school tomorrow, try for an update
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 07:58 pm
YES. :D
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 07:55 pm
Yeah, go right ahead. You're perfect.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 07:48 pm
Just let me know if it sounds okay before I continue tonight.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 07:44 pm
What do you need here?
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 07:38 pm
Yup.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 07:24 pm
@Even: This isn't a whole chapter. Am I looking at the right thing?
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:33 pm
:D
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:30 pm
Koosh balls...pound puppies...and the Puffalump.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 06:28 pm
Yes!
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:26 pm
And the Original Tiny Polly Pockets.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:22 pm
I also had the Playskool and Fisher price dollhouses and a ton of accessories.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:19 pm
Pogs...wow. I feel kind of old now.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:17 pm
Treasure trolls!
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:11 pm
Smooshees...
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 06:10 pm
I'm looking up toys from the eighties and nineties that I used to have. :-) Cupcake dolls..care bears...Rainbow Brite...
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:47 pm
@Swanky: Thanks...it's not even a full chapter yet, just three paragraphs. Just needed your opinion on it. :-)
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:40 pm
@Even: I got your link. I'll review it once I get home. I might have a chapter for you tonight too.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:38 pm
Sounds awesome.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:37 pm
Ok so no poll we do it this way. We can start one first thing next month.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:32 pm
Absolutely :-)
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:32 pm
That's true! Challenges would be more fair.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:31 pm
With authors submitting their fics? You're probably right...if it were left up to the members we'd have people picking the same people over and over.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:30 pm
Readers vote either way. The poll will decide the winner. The difference is how it's nominated to partake.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:29 pm
The skin poll ends tomorrow, we can make it a poll. I'm thinking the challenge way might be best though, less drama.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:28 pm
Tough choice.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:27 pm
The readers voting would be good...
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:26 pm
Hmm. Maybe it should be put to the people? I can see how both would work, it really depends what would work better & what people would like better.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:22 pm
The difference is in one case the authors add themselves. In the other the readers pick.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:21 pm
Fair enough! Sounds good!
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:20 pm
Ah, makes sense. So anything would go.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:20 pm
That's what I was thinking,
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:19 pm
It wouldn't have restrictions. It would just be called February Featured Challenge or whatever.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:18 pm
Maybe by nomination? Challenges normally aren't broad enough to allow everyone to enter.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:17 pm
Definitely.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:17 pm
I think we should still keep it to completed fics only.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:16 pm
We can either do the monthly as a nomination thing on the news posts or as a challenge.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:16 pm
Good :-)
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:15 pm
Done deal then!
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 05:14 pm
I like it too. :-)
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:12 pm
I like the monthly idea. Encourages better writing, and sends more to the featured section so it's not dead.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:11 pm
Yeah, that sounds good. Since admins seem to come and go. Makes more sense.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:11 pm
So we have a monthly featured.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:11 pm
My second thought is a monthly challenge to vote on starting feb.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:10 pm
For one get rid of the buttons and just make an "admins pick" for all that are on there by our choosing.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:08 pm
What were you thinking for it?
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:07 pm
Lol, I'll try to think of an idea then.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:07 pm
I want to revamp the featured section too.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:06 pm
You should. It's my effort to pack this site with good shit again.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 26, 2012 05:04 pm
I don't know. My writing is hell clumsy at the moment. If I get an idea though, I'll probably give it a go.
Senora Swanky
Jan 26, 2012 05:02 pm
Hey Rebel, you submitting to the challenge?
Sikaha
Jan 26, 2012 03:00 pm
But I have yet to sketch down my thought process. Which is the easiest part of the whole thing.
Sikaha
Jan 26, 2012 02:59 pm
I'm procastinating my art project... I'm supposed to make a clay piece bearing relevance to a CD cover. Decided to make a more realistic, 3D version of the hand and heartgrenade...
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 02:52 pm
It kind of sounds like Procreation.
RedMin
Jan 26, 2012 02:46 pm
PROCRASTINATION! My word ! :D this word is so awesome I'm gonna die!
colormestupidx
Jan 26, 2012 02:46 pm
Haha, I do that sometimes too.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 02:21 pm
Me, lol.
tess em
Jan 26, 2012 02:01 pm
I'm actually procrastinating the things I like to do. Who does that...
tess em
Jan 26, 2012 02:01 pm
I am such a slacker
Daniel Johns
Jan 26, 2012 07:09 am
Same here, mate!
colormestupidx
Jan 26, 2012 05:43 am
I'm oddly looking forward to this ass-confetti button that's been mentioned.
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 01:09 am
:D
Daniel Johns
Jan 26, 2012 12:48 am
Good on ya! :D
Evenstar606
Jan 26, 2012 12:46 am
Mooo. I just wrote three paragraphs. Making progress on what will be a long ass chapter. Not finishing it tonight, though.
RedMin
Jan 25, 2012 11:00 pm
Fuck fuck fuck why? I wanted to sleep six hours more! Damn! Why is it Thursday? Why didn't I do my TPs?! That's not fair! Not fair!Why life why? Why do shoutboxes lie? Why?
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 09:42 pm
I just saw Travis Barker's dick. My childhood has come full circle.
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 09:29 pm
@Saint Links don't work in the shout, and please don't spam.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 09:14 pm
SaintofDenial... I'm in denial of your ability to post on the shout correctly.
SaintofDenial
Jan 25, 2012 09:12 pm
cy-commissions-help Please help get the word out if even if you cant donate!
SaintofDenial
Jan 25, 2012 09:12 pm
cy-commissions-help Please help get the word out if even if you cant donate!
SaintofDenial
Jan 25, 2012 09:00 pm
cy-commissions-help Please help get the word out if even if you cant donate!
SaintofDenial
Jan 25, 2012 08:59 pm
cy-commissions-help Please help get the word out if even if you cant donate!
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 08:48 pm
It's everywhere! Even when I don't think I'm gonna smoke one day, I end up baked.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 08:36 pm
Ha ha.
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 08:13 pm
It's the abundance of pot that's suddenly entered my life. I'm so distracted...
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 08:11 pm
Tess is the girl who once finished an eighteen chapter fic in two weeks. Ha ha.
Senora Swanky
Jan 25, 2012 08:08 pm
I'm thinking I'll have one by tomorrow, which is strange because you can out update me any day and lately I've been beating you in that department.
Senora Swanky
Jan 25, 2012 08:07 pm
Yeah, you are lol. I wants an update.
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 07:56 pm
I'm really slacking on here, sorry guys
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 07:53 pm
That's a good idea
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 05:47 pm
Sounds good.
Senora Swanky
Jan 25, 2012 05:44 pm
I think we should just start opening news post to weigh in user opinions in terms of how we manage things.
colormestupidx
Jan 25, 2012 04:50 pm
Damn lying shoutboxes!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 04:26 pm
shouldn't*. Damn you shoutbox! Don't say I have 6 characters left if that's not the case!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 04:25 pm
That's a grand idea! Though you should definitely keep The Magical Closet Journey as a featured story. I wouldn't trust Dan to have the power to choose what should be featured and what shouldn
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 04:25 pm
That way the whole site can get involved.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 04:24 pm
That sounds like a great idea, I like it.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 04:24 pm
Good point.
Senora Swanky
Jan 25, 2012 04:23 pm
Maybe we do some contests and set things to vote and take off the admin buttons for admin's pick?
Senora Swanky
Jan 25, 2012 04:22 pm
I just noticed the convo on featured. I'm wondering how we should be handling that section being that admins came and went. Also there's nothing new to keep it going.
LifeSuxThenUDie
Jan 25, 2012 03:38 pm
My internet is working again!!! Hallelujah!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 02:56 pm
Ipecac is a funny word, lol.
colormestupidx
Jan 25, 2012 02:39 pm
I want a Drop Dead tee!
RedMin
Jan 25, 2012 02:18 pm
So. Fucking. Tired. Today I met a Danny Worsnop copy cat. Uh. I just about spaced. There was this boy with a GD shirt, and that girl with a fabulous Drop Dead tee.
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 01:29 pm
I don't know when exactly, but I'm having a really shitty day so I need to go live in my made up world for a little while.
colormestupidx
Jan 25, 2012 12:47 pm
Huzzah!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:40 pm
YAY!
tess em
Jan 25, 2012 12:36 pm
There will be an update from me tonight.
Roxy Roadster
Jan 25, 2012 10:38 am
Edie Falco.
colormestupidx
Jan 25, 2012 10:22 am
Just a little.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 08:23 am
Yeah, it sort of gives it away, doesn't it?
qwertyuiop12345
Jan 25, 2012 06:45 am
You know, staring at that picture on the front page, I can't help but wonder who was top.
hxcpanda
Jan 25, 2012 06:16 am
Mayyyy write a new fic. Potentially involving the yakuza (Japanese mafia). Hmm.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 02:27 am
Yay!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 02:23 am
I feel a little better, I finished my outline.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:53 am
Dan is a happy man!!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:52 am
Hooroo!
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:50 am
Dinnertime! Hooroo to you all!
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:49 am
Anyway, tomorrow's Australia Day, so we'll visit the rellos, and throw some snags on the barbie.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:47 am
Well, fair dinkum, I'm gobsmacked. There's no need to chuck a spaz and earbash us all.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:42 am
:D
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:41 am
LMAO! :D
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:39 am
Hahahahaha!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:36 am
That conversation made me grin like a shot fox! Too right! Just call me Figjam! I must go clean the freckle now before I become flat out like a lizard drinking!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:34 am
You little ripper! Ace! No need to big-note oneself, but this is going to be a beaut! Oye, I think someone opened their lunch over here if you know what I mean. It must have been my jumbuck!
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:28 am
I actually have no response for this. You go ahead, I'll watch ;)
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:27 am
That was a very good pun indeed.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:24 am
That explains it! I could go for some Sunny Delight. Pun? Yes! Rebel, talk Australian with me! :D
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:23 am
And that is why it is in the Featured Section.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:22 am
My Poodle Sunny would say, It's Awesome.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:22 am
:D No worries!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:21 am
Sadly, after going through the Featured section, I discovered that The Magical Closet Journey is Featured. I'm not sure what to say to that.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:21 am
@Rebel: That is so true. Thanks!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:19 am
:D
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:19 am
@Even: You can be totally amazing! Don't compare yourself; being different can sometimes be the best thing.
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:18 am
Good! You're one of my favorite people! I'm a simple bloke. Just keep the dingos away and I'll be a happy camper for all!
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:17 am
Oh Dan, you never fail to put a smile on my face. :D
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:16 am
;D
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:16 am
I gave up on that a long time ago and just accepted the fact that I am illiterate :D
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:16 am
Hahaha art! Nice ;)
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:15 am
I do it every fucking time...damnit.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:14 am
I need to stop comparing my writing to that in the Featured Section. >.<
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:14 am
It takes time to create art!
Daniel Johns
Jan 25, 2012 12:13 am
I quite like it, though it cannot replace my Catz! No balls touched so therefore, no homo! Just throwing that out there.
Evenstar606
Jan 25, 2012 12:13 am
Okay, so I'm totally feeling inadequate right now. May not update tonight after all.
rebelwithoutacause
Jan 25, 2012 12:10 am
Oh man, that picture is killing me!
RedMin
Jan 24, 2012 11:52 pm
Oh my god I feel so lame with the Oaks chapter. I think it will reveal alot of things for you to understand but maybe too much. And shit, reader will wait for second part! Nuff said!
AlexaLayne13
Jan 24, 2012 11:24 pm
Thank you! I tried, and I see what she meant. I do need to learn more though, so it was actually really helpful, but for some reason my nerves lost their shit.
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 11:19 pm
Swanky's review? Don't be nervous about it, really. :-) You took her advice well and didn't pitch a fit. That's very mature. And I know you'll improve.
AlexaLayne13
Jan 24, 2012 11:06 pm
That review probably made me more nervous than it should have, and I'm not even sure why. Lovely.
Llcatz
Jan 24, 2012 09:39 pm
I feel so betrayed!
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 09:34 pm
Lol ... semi-awkward is an understatement of that photo.
colormestupidx
Jan 24, 2012 09:25 pm
Yikes. I am going to go to bed to avoid this semi-awkward situation. Pip pip.
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:25 pm
NEVER! I am a man, and I am weak. I fell for Billie's charms, but he's nothing to me!
Llcatz
Jan 24, 2012 09:24 pm
I knew that you were back with Billie... :'(
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:22 pm
Catz! I don't know what's going on! Pictures are not worth a thousand words! They're worth nothing!
colormestupidx
Jan 24, 2012 09:21 pm
Night, Savannah!
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:18 pm
Goodnight everyone! Thanks for the support lol I dont feel nearly as bad as i did before
Llcatz
Jan 24, 2012 09:15 pm
I think I've missed something...
colormestupidx
Jan 24, 2012 09:10 pm
Aww, Dan and Billie look so cute together. *tear*
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:09 pm
well, this little avenger has classes tomorrow. So Im hitting the sheets.
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:09 pm
lol!
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:08 pm
Hell yeah you would!
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:07 pm
....yes i would dan. Even tho i already have a foreigner as my bf lol
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:07 pm
I'll admit, Billie and I have flings, but come on! If you could have a one night stand with me, wouldn't you?
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:06 pm
...good luck with that. lol
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 09:06 pm
Clearly he's back with Billie now as of the news post. Unofficially of course.
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 09:05 pm
I've never had a boyfriend, so I wouldn't know, lol.
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:05 pm
As you should be! We have a glorious relationship! ...I hope she doesn't see that photo of Billie and myself.
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 09:04 pm
I'm the worst person to ask about morals because I love revenge.
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:04 pm
HAHAHAHAHA Yes dan. Yes it was. I was jealous of you and Catz. :-P
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:03 pm
That was you?!?
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:03 pm
I am quite the vindictive ex GF. I spraypainted a guys entire car black once. And slashed his tires. Then i duct taped the doors shut
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:02 pm
LOL> Thanks guys. Dan: *HUG*
Daniel Johns
Jan 24, 2012 09:01 pm
Come savannah, give old Dan-o an Australian hug!
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 09:01 pm
Lmao! Good job! Tell him you have super herpes, like herpes but better. Fun fact: it's not curable!
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 09:01 pm
Damn' laggy interwebz...my reply came too late.
tess em
Jan 24, 2012 09:00 pm
Babygate was the worst week of my life what a buzzkill
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 09:00 pm
..thats obvious from babygate tess lol
tess em
Jan 24, 2012 08:59 pm
I don't think you did anything wrong then again my decision making skills are awful
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 08:58 pm
What do you guys think?
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 08:58 pm
Wwhat did you do, savannah? Lol.
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 08:58 pm
He also cheated (hence the test), lied, and used me for sex
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 08:58 pm
For the record, he did psychologically abuse me. and physically assault me
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 08:57 pm
I just lied to my ex-boyfriend. I told him that the tests from the STD test i had to get (courtesy of him) weren't negative, when in fact they were. Am I terrible?
savannah1620
Jan 24, 2012 08:56 pm
...so i think i might be the biggest bitch in the world...
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 08:43 pm
It's not that serious really, but yeah.
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 08:30 pm
Welcome to Sullen Riot. See what you just did there? That doesn't usually end well.
Abbyliciousness
Jan 24, 2012 08:26 pm
Read my first story! It's a pre-Green Day story, eventual Billie/Tre relationship.
tess em
Jan 24, 2012 08:07 pm
Fuck guys I have so much to read
tess em
Jan 24, 2012 06:38 pm
it's like a fucking religious experience
colormestupidx
Jan 24, 2012 06:28 pm
omnomnom?
tess em
Jan 24, 2012 06:08 pm
i'm sitting on my bed eating corn by the kernel
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 05:29 pm
Haha, amazing what a week has brought upon us. I want more! More win!!
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 05:14 pm
There's so much great stuff, I love it.
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 05:08 pm
Awesome! Can't wait to see what you come up with.
BillieMikeTreSis13
Jan 24, 2012 04:59 pm
I'm planning on answering the challenge...just haven't figured out what I'm gonna write yet :P
Senora Swanky
Jan 24, 2012 04:49 pm
Yeah and it's fucken win! This challenge just got real! More people answer to it!
Evenstar606
Jan 24, 2012 04:47 pm
gdxaddict updated and I didn't notice...YAY!
BillieMikeTreSis13
Jan 24, 2012 04:43 pm
I agree with that XD!
colormestupidx
Jan 24, 2012 03:42 pm
Yay for procrastination!
RedMin
Jan 24, 2012 03:26 pm
Cheese IS disgusting. Okay... Got the motivation for Oaks... Maybe I'm gonna send it to Fabulous Beta. Not now. Some time.

Shout Archive

Refresh the Shoutbox

BE JEALOUS!

G'day... so I thought that it was better that you mates heard it from me before it was released publically. Billie and I were caught in a compromising situation last week and we were surprised to find that someone took pictures of our intimate encounter. I tried to deny it, but things just happen. We're not in a relationship, we were just having a bit of fun! Also, I'm growing my hair out and it's a different shade of blond than what I already have.

So don't judge and be jealous!

--Daniel Johns on 01/24/2012 08:55 PM 14 Comments -----------------------------------------------------------

SR Revamp

Dear Members,

As you may all know I've been busy lately. The thing is since I've been absent I've also been getting complaints about how much the site standards have declined in many ways. Everyone knows I'm a bitch, now a few of us have figured out why. Regardless, the bitch is back and I'm making changes.

Here's what I have in store for you buttmunches:

- New default skin - please vote on the poll or comment on this news post

- Link button to The Attic (for those who want to write real fiction)

- An ass confetti button if someone wants to provide one

- Optimizing the tracked stories feature

- New Welcome message so n00bcakes know what they're in for

- New rules and standards for current and new admins

- Removal of admins that have been missing for over a year (you know who you are, if you want admin back just email me)

- New and improved rejection letters with links to beta readers and author help

- More writing help

- I still want a forum on here, but at this point I'd rather have a functioning site, so this may still be a while. Efic has promised us 4.0 but has not delivered

With that said please vote on the poll and please add your ideas of how to make this a better site in the comments. For those of you who use other efic run sites, please let me know if they have a feature that we don't and I can add.

- Swanks

--Swanks on 01/22/2012 08:21 PM 6 Comments -----------------------------------------------------------

New Skin Ideas

Hey everyone,

To go along with the Site Revamp, we're looking to update the skins on here to give the site an updated look. We have one idea in mind, but it would be awesome to hear your ideas and opinions. If you have an idea for a new skin, tell us about it in the comments! :D

--Evenstar606 on 01/16/2012 02:06 PM 34 Comments -----------------------------------------------------------

SR revamp challenge

Here's the link to submit to:

Sullen Riot needs an Enema

There are no rules or restrictions to what your story should be about. It should just be good, it should be your best and it should have a plot!!! What it shouldn't be is the same old, same old. Think, plot, submit. We need to up the ante on this site!

--Swanks on 01/11/2012 06:22 PM 1 Comments -----------------------------------------------------------

REPOST LOLOLOLOLOL

REVIEW THE REVIEW LOLOLOL!!!

I hope you realize that YOU are the reason I decided to come back and go on a deny deny deny spree. Drivel like this is... oh god.

Have fun kids.

Reviewer: Senora Swanky Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 08:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously? Are you writing a script? Descriptions anybody? Here's the thing: this isn't very good ... at all. It's pretty much the epitome of fandom wank in the form of a Gary Stu ... and that's not even mentioning the array of spelling and grammar errors. Please go make friends with your shift key, that way you put capitals at the beginning of sentences.

While I'm sure Billie wasn't exactly the brightest crayon in the box in high school, this is kind of pushing the envelope. He acts like he's a homosexual five year old having a temper tantrum. "WAHHHHHH!!! Mommy doesn't love me!!!! I want it in the butt!!!! WAHHHH!!!"

I get the fluffy, cute, Bike thing. Aw, they're cute boys and they're BFFs ... blah, blah, blah. You missed the band wagon by a mile on this one. I can't suspend belief for a second based on how out of character Billie is, and how flat every other character is.

My recommendation: Learn to write descriptions. Challenge yourself by writing without using a drop of dialogue. Have a good hard look at Billie Joe's old interviews before you try writing him as some mentally challenged Manga "boylove" character - you're writing for GD fans, not Harajuku girls. And get a beta.

Author's Response: No one really seems to careeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't care! I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't care! I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't care I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't, I don't care if you don't care! I don't care! Oh also, 'he acts like a homosexual five year old' first: homosexual people are just normal people, you're sterotyping him...don't sterotype kid. Secondly: Where you from, because here you don't find many five year old homosexuals thirdly: Get a life and listen to Green Day. Chocolate milk bitch

--Daddyoneguy on 01/10/2012 08:15 PM 15 Comments -----------------------------------------------------------

News Archive